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  1. #1
    Babel-Neuling
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    Sich auf englisch vorstellen

    Hallo,

    ein Bekannter von mir muss sich am Donnerstag auf englisch vorstellen (die Englischlehrerin möchte, dass sich jeder Teilnehmer kurz vorstellt).
    Er hat den folgenden Text geschrieben. Ich selber bin da ein wenig überfordert und kann ihn dabei nicht viel helfen. Vielleicht könntet ihr ihm helfen und Korrekturen bzw. Verbesserung vorschlagen. Aus Diskretionsgründen habe ich selbstverständlich alle persönliche Informationen gelöscht bzw. Zeichen (***<>***) in seinem Texte gesetzt .
    Schon mal Danke im Vorraus an alle.
    Liebe Grüsse,
    Brett.

    Good afternoon,
    Let me introduce myself to you,
    My name is ***<Name+Vorname>*** but every one call me ***<Kurzname>*** because it’s shortest.


    I am 44, I was born near Lyon in a small town called ***<Ortsname>*** in 1963.
    I live now in ***<Stadt>*** in the north of Paris.
    I’m married and I have three children’s, ***<Vorname_Sohn>*** a boy of 12 years, ***<Vorname_Tochter>*** a girl of 10 years and ***<Vorname_zweiter_Sohn>*** another boy of 2 years.

    I got the Level of BTEC IT of Management in 199*.

    I join this training of IT project manager at ***<Ausbildungszentrum>*** to develop my skills in computing management.
    Before, I worked as lan administrator since April 199* for ***<Firmenname>*** (The State ensured this Association for developing the employment of disabled people in the private sector).

    To join this job, in 199*, I‘m successfully passed the Novell certifications (CNE : Certified Novell Engineer) and CNA (Certified Novell Administrator).

    Novell was a company appreciate in the world of Local Area Netware Operating System Company.

    Between 199* and 199* I was an IT Manager for ***<Firmenname>***, a small business company that operates in the advertising sending activity domain.

    Before this job I work as an analyst-programmer in ***<Stadt>*** with another small business company ***<Firmenname>*** and I developed a search added designed software.

    And in 198*, I was a trainer assistant for ***<Name>*** a training of computing Association.

    I like sports like football, basket-ball, tennis.
    I enjoy Watching TV and also Listening music but I don’t play it.


    Thank you for you attention.

  2. #2
    Babel-Legende
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    AW: Sich auf englisch vorstellen

    Zu den Fachausdrücken kann ich nicht viel sagen, aber der Rest war (fast) ok:

    salut, Didier


    Good afternoon,
    Let me introduce myself to you,
    My name is ***<Name+Vorname>*** but everyone call me ***<Kurzname>*** because it’s shorter.


    I am 44 years old, I was born near Lyon in a small town named ***<Ortsname>*** in 1963.
    I live now in ***<Stadt>*** in the north of Paris.
    I’m married and I have three childrens, ***<Vorname_Sohn>*** a boy of 12 years, ***<Vorname_Tochter>*** a girl of 10 years and ***<Vorname_zweiter_Sohn>*** another boy of 2 years.

    I got the Level of BTEC IT of Management in 199*.

    I join this training of IT project manager at ***<Ausbildungszentrum>*** to develop my skills in computing management.
    Before, I worked as lan administrator since April 199* for ***<Firmenname>*** (The State ensured this Association for developing the employment of disabled people in the private sector).

    To join this job, in 199*, I successfully passed the Novell certifications (CNE : Certified Novell Engineer) and CNA (Certified Novell Administrator).

    Novell was a company which is appreciated in the world of Local Area Netware Operating System Company.

    Between 199* and 199* I was an IT Manager for ***<Firmenname>***, a small business company that operates in the advertising sending activity domain.

    Before this job I work as an analyst-programmer in ***<Stadt>*** with another small business company ***<Firmenname>*** and I developed a search added designed software.

    And in 198*, I was a trainer assistant for ***<Name>*** a training of computing Association.

    I like sports like football, basketball, tennis.
    I enjoy watching TV and also listening to music but I don’t play it.


    Thank you for you attention.

  3. #3
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    Re: Sich auf englisch vorstellen

    I’m married and I have three childrens
    children bitte ohne 's', da es schon die Mehrzahl von 'child' ist.

    Before this job I work as an ...
    Before this job I worked as an ...

    I enjoy watching TV and also listening to music but I don’t play any instrument.
    Ich hoffe, ich konnte helfen.

  4. #4
    Babel-Neuling
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    Hallo
    ich muss mich morgen auf englisch vor meiner neuen klasse vorstellen und würde euch bitten eben drüberzu schauen ob ich irgendwelche felher eingebaut hab oder falls ihr tipps habt was noch rein könnte.

    Danke im vorraus, Mates.
    Hi,
    I’m Matthäus Kowalski, and im 16 years old.
    I was born on the 5th April 1993 Geldern.
    My both parents are from Poland, near the Baltic Sea.
    My whole family still live there. We drive every year 10 hours by car to visit them.
    And at home i only speak polish with my Parents.

    I attend now to the Lise-Meitner Gymnasium in Geldern.
    Before, I attend to the Realschule An der Fleuth.
    My favorite subject is geography, and of course English.

    Now I want to tell you something about my hobbies:
    My greatest hobby is football.
    I used to play in a team, but in my freetime I like to play with my friends.
    I’ve got a season ticket at Borussia Dortmund, my favorite club.
    I’m every second Saturday or Sunday there.
    The journey to Dortmund takes me around 2 hours by train.
    Sometimes when I got a ticket I also go to away matches.
    Another hobby of me is to meet my friends and go out or play with the PC.

    My favorite music is a little bit hip-hop, techno and house.



    So far I don’t know what I want to do after School.

    That was it. If u have got questions u can ask me J

  5. #5
    Babel-Neuling
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    Zitat Zitat von BVBmates Beitrag anzeigen
    Hallo
    ich muss mich morgen auf englisch vor meiner neuen klasse vorstellen und würde euch bitten eben drüberzu schauen ob ich irgendwelche felher eingebaut hab oder falls ihr tipps habt was noch rein könnte.

    Danke im vorraus, Mates.
    Hi,
    I’m Matthäus Kowalski, and im 16 years old.
    I was born on the 5th April 1993 Geldern.
    My both parents are from Poland, near the Baltic Sea.
    My whole family still live there. We drive every year 10 hours by car to visit them.
    And at home i only speak polish with my Parents.

    I attend now to the Lise-Meitner Gymnasium in Geldern.
    Before, I attend to the Realschule An der Fleuth.
    My favorite subject is geography, and of course English.

    Now I want to tell you something about my hobbies:
    My greatest hobby is football.
    I used to play in a team. Now I just meet my friends in my free time and we play football.

    I’ve got a season ticket at Borussia Dortmund, my favorite club.
    I’m every second Saturday or Sunday there.
    The journey to Dortmund takes me around 2 hours by train.
    Sometimes when I got a ticket I also go to away matches. I already was in Munich, Frankfurt, Wolfsburg and Hannover.
    The best match I saw was the derby Dortmund-Schalke. Dortmund won 2:0.

    Sometimes when I got a ticket I also go to away matches.
    Another hobby of me is to meet my friends and go out or play with the PC.

    My favorite music is a little bit hip-hop, techno and house.



    So far I don’t know what I want to do after School.

    That was it. If u have got questions u can ask me J









    so ist es richitg ;p

  6. #6
    Babel-Meister
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    AW: Sich auf englisch vorstellen

    Zitat Zitat von BVBmates Beitrag anzeigen
    Hallo
    ich muss mich morgen auf englisch vor meiner neuen klasse vorstellen und würde euch bitten eben drüberzu schauen ob ich irgendwelche felher eingebaut hab oder falls ihr tipps habt was noch rein könnte.

    Danke im voraus, Mates.
    Hi,
    I’m Matthäus Kowalski, and im 16 years old.
    I was born on the 5th April 1993 in Geldern.
    My both parents are from Poland, a place near the Baltic Sea.
    My whole family still lives there. We go there every year to visit them; it always takes us ten hours by car. drive every year 10 hours by car to visit them.
    And at homeI only speak Polish with my parents at home..

    I now attend Lise-Meitner Gymnasium in Geldern.
    I attended Realschule An der Fleuth before..
    My favourite subjects are geography, and of course English.

    Now I tell you something about my hobbies:
    My greatest hobby is football.
    I used to play in a team, but in my freetime I like playing with my friends.
    I’ve got a season ticket for Borussia Dortmund, my favourite club.
    I’m there every second Saturday or Sunday
    The journey to Dortmund takes me around 2 hours by train.
    Sometimes when I got a ticket I also travel to away matches in other cities in Germany..
    Another hobby of me is meeting my friends and going out or playing with the PC.

    My favourite music is a little bit hip-hop, techno and house.



    So far I don’t know what I want to do after School.

    That was it. If u have got questions u can ask me J

    Du hättest hier einen neuen thread starten können.

    fett= eingefügt bzw. korrigiert; rot = gestrichen

    Lorli

  7. #7
    Babel-Kenner
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    AW: Sich auf englisch vorstellen

    Zitat Zitat von Lorli Beitrag anzeigen
    Zitat von BVBmates
    Hallo
    ich muss mich morgen auf englisch vor meiner neuen klasse vorstellen und würde euch bitten eben drüberzu schauen ob ich irgendwelche felher eingebaut hab oder falls ihr tipps habt was noch rein könnte.

    Danke im Voraus, Mates.
    Hi,
    I’m Matthäus Kowalski, and I'm 16 years old.
    I was born on (the) 5th April 1993 in Geldern.
    Both my parents are from Poland, [a place near the Baltic Sea.] unnecessary information
    My whole family still lives there. We go there every year to visit them; it always [... usually ...] takes us ten hours by car. drive every year 10 hours by car to visit them.
    And at homeI only speak Polish with my parents at home..

    I now attend Lise-Meitner Gymnasium in Geldern.
    I attended Realschule An der Fleuth before..
    My favourite subjects are geography, and of course English.

    Now I tell [... I'm going to tell ...] you something about my hobbies:
    My greatest [?] hobby is football.
    I used to play in a team but in my free-time I like playing with my friends.
    I’ve got a season ticket for Borussia Dortmund, my favourite club.
    I’m there every second Saturday or Sunday
    The journey [trip] to Dortmund takes me around 2 hours by train.
    Sometimes when I get a ticket I also travel to away matches in other cities in Germany..
    Another hobby of mine is meeting my friends and going out or playing with the PC.

    My favourite music is a little bit [?] hip-hop, techno and house.



    So far I don’t know what I want to do after school. [... after finishing school]

    That was [is] it. If you have got any questions you can ask me J [... go ahead and ask me...]



    Du hättest hier einen neuen thread starten können.

    fett= eingefügt bzw. korrigiert; rot = gestrichen

    Lorli
    my color: pink

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